Troy Writing Group Post

In my writing group we all did a free verse writing each & a cinquains each to write as well. 

Feedback: I like your writing Ross.
Feedforward: I think next time you can make the description bigger. Corton.


Evolution: I think  my writing is really good & it's the best stage I can put it at.

Pre Reading Post Term 4

Book covering: The first thing I spotted was the person that looked like a detective & the police car.

Title: The name Madam spry & the blue diamond well definitely make people need to buy this book really bad.

Blurb: The blurb makes me really really want to read because it is so mysterious & exciting adventure ahead to see.

I think the story is based on a one lost fantastic blue diamond & a super secret spy on the case to discover who, how stole the fantastic blue diamond that belongs to a famus museum. Probably someone stole it because they wanted to be rich & famous.

Te Reo Portfolio Sample Term 3

In te reo we were in to different groups finding out the māori words for our body parts. This video shows me & Miko telling you 4 words body parts in māori. This video is mostly for 5 & 6 year olds.






Before we were split into different groups we did the song hoohky poohky in māori to warm us up to do some body parts in māori.



Feedback/feedforward: Why couldn't you do more words that's why we leant most of the body parts but I think the video suits 5&6 year olds



Evaluation:I like it that  it suits for little people but still it could be longer.

Writing Portfolio Sample

In my writing group we were making a piece of writing about life & I choose to do an info text. 

                            

This is my writing.

In our writing we have been learning about adjectives. To make a info text you find information about something then turn it into your own words.

Feedback/feedforward: I think you have done well with putting in detail but next time i think you should make your story longer.

Thomasm.

Evaluation: I think I did pretty well with my info but still it needs to be longer.

Maths Portfolio Sample term 3

WALT: In my maths group we were learning times tables & division 

                                                 

We did division on this question it was 36 divide 5 =8 because I put down 5 people in 7 cars but in a car there is one person so there are 8 cars.

On this question we did times tables it was 6x7= 42 because there were 7 people in each 6 cars then I took the 2 from each 7 then 5x6=30 & 2x6=12 then 30+12=42.

Feedback/feedforward:I think what you did really well was how you wore able to think of two ways to answer the same question maybe next time you could add In some more detail is to what you did /ashley.

Evaluation: I did pretty well with my learning but I did need more info of what we were doing.

 

Drama Portfolio Sample

We have been learning drama with Rebecca. My favourite thing about drama was you can't take me because it was lots of fun & other people came up with good ideas.

If you want to know how to play you can't take me read this. You can't take me goes like this there is a group of people then you choose what room you are going to act in then choose what prop you are going to be then you come up with at least 3 comments to say that so somebody doesn't take you away then have someone come to the room & see if he/she can take you away. 

Feedback/feedforward: I liked how you told me how fun you it Was Next time you could make more sense.

Evaluation: Drama was & exciting as well I should make more sense.

 

Production Planning

Me and poutama are getting ready for our production which is based on ora. by making our own wearable art as in costumes. Mine is pretty cool for me but if you want to see more go to Ben p blog & also check out jake's blog. I am in hero's & villains & we are upcycling.

For my costume I am going to papper masha my horns & my mask, I'am gonna make my top & pants out of black rubbish bags, & also paint them like a zombie.

Hi welcome back this is ment to be a update on this post sorry there is no photo on this update    because on my paper masha balloon popped oh well next thing I am going to work on is my shoes & pants.

This is my finished costume hope you like it.

1) The materials that I used to create my garment were: Red & black paint, cardboard, pants, t-shirt, skull mask.

2) The most challenging thing about production for me was: Getting the horns.

3) One way I demonstrated a growth mindset during production was: My t-shirt & pants.

4) Something I am really proud of about production was: my mask.

5) Our school vision is to create agency, creativity and excellence. I showed this by: using clothes from home creativity. I did it to the best standard I can do excellence. I finished it  just before the deadline agency.

Evaluation: Think my costume is brilliant but I could of done it faster.

Reading Portfolio Sample Term 3 Week 4

Hi this tic tac toe I did was somebody-wanted-but-so-then. Everyone in poutama does a tic tac toe for our blog each week this term. There is to groups called summarising & questioning. I am in summarising.

The task was somebody-wanted-but-so-then. In my workshops I have been learning about summarising we use key words & write down the main points for summarising.

Feedback/feedforward:next time you can put a description. Shaiv.

I like the way you said your gaol was sumericeig. Shaiv.

Evaluations: I think I did really will on my somebody-wanted-but-so-then tic tac toe I think as I can do.

Et Reo

Every Monday me and my te reo group come to the matt to learn about māori.

 
Today we were learning about the name of food in māori and putting it in a video to sharing it with you.

Feedback/feedforward: I like the way that you got the food in your hand. Next time you could put down your food.Kai.

Evaluation: I think putting the food in my hand was great. Next time I could speak more clearly.

The Digestive System

We have made a short movie to share what we have learnt about digestion this term.
Success Criteria
Our movie has:

*lots of interesting details about digestion that our audience won’t know

*clear explanations about each stage of the digestion process (talking clearly and loudly, using specific science vocabulary)
*clear images

*humour/interesting detail to keep the audience engaged

BIG IDEA: Digestion is all about breaking food down into tiny bits so it is small enough to travel around in your blood to feed your body and give it energy.

Feedback/feedforward: I really liked your movie I like the way you and your group have been really clear. Your need to slow down your photos so we can read them.#jett.


Evaluation: me & my group have been working really hard on this movie for 6 days I think. I do think I need to put my voice in the movie.

Writing Activity

WALT: Select words carefully to impact our audience. In our writing we are putting in adverbs, verbs, adjectives, precise nouns, nouns and simile's.

It's not nice to be small. It's a bit nice that cind old people love to use me and them showing the kids how to use me. Then someone grabs me they put me down on a pin they grab a long steal stick. Then they wacked me with all their might "Ouch Wach it.". I was flying so high I was like an airplane then I was going down like a meteorite to earth and then I was skidding towards a mini hole. I was leaning to go into it then score hole in one. It's not so bad being a golf ball.

Feedback/feedforward:I like the story and simile next time you could describe more of the ball and the golf stick.

Evaluation: I think I do need to talk about the ball even more and the golf stick info. 

Maths Portfolio sample

Me and my class are doing maths and putting some of our learning on our blogs for our math's and my maths group was given a big paper to each of us to do question from a small peace of paper called Rebelsport.

                                                                  

The strategy I used was partitioning and I am in stage 5 for my math's.

Feedback/feedforward: I think you should not fold your post so you can see tidy writeing. I think that you should use a ruleler for your two lines going down and up.

Evaluation: I think I'am to good for partitioning I think I need to on a new goal.

Phenomenal Word Jar

For our tic tac toe in Poutama every one does a tic tac toe for our learning and my goal is expanding  vocabulary. Everyone in poutama has their own goal to work on they are comprehension and expanding vocabulary.

My tic tac toe activity is phenomenal word. I have to write juicy in my writers note book and write what the mean.

Feedback/feedforward: Maybe put more words. Rebekah.

Evaluation: I think I should put more words and work on track more.

Catch Me If You Can- Defense

Description:

Every week we learn about skills and movement that will help us play sports. This term’s focus has been around defense. We made a video showing some of the goals we have been practicing. I have highlighted the thing I think I have done well YELLOW and one thing I would like to work on PINK.

Body:

WALT: Defensive skills and movements

Success Criteria:

Body Movement

• Weight on balls of feet
• Feet shoulder width apart
• Knees flexed
• Concentration and eyes on ball, head and eyes up
• Push hard off outside foot and go forwards to attack pass
• Quick small feet, stay on balls of feet
• Arms within confines of body
• Take feet to ball
• Land with a SBP

Intercepting

• Body angled to see player and ball
• Anticipate pass and player movement

Restrictive Marking

• Meet player as they start towards the ball/where they want to go
• stay close to the attacking player
• Head and eyes up, arms close to body to avoid obstruction/contact
• Angle body so attacking player is ‘pushed’ away from where he/she wants to go
• 0.9m from ball carrier

Evaluation: I thimk my defences & my blog is cool and I hope it stays that way.

Feedback/Feedforward: you can make the link work and tell people what the pink and yellow.

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Descriptive Sentences

A boy went to the super market. A girl walked to the super market

2 Stars & A Wish

This is my 2 stars & a wish.

Title: Te Ahu a Turanga Noho Marae

Description:  In week 7, we had an overnight stay at the local Marae in Woodville.  We were immersed in Maori culture and participated in a range of activities.  We set two goals to focus on during our stay.

Big Idea:  

1.  Did you achieve your goals? Yes. How do you know? Because I got on with it & had breakfast  then got dressed.

2.  What are you most proud of from the marae stay and why? The game with Stephen because it was loads of fun.

3.  What challenged you the most and why? The challenge with ebony because it was really hard.

Title: Position and Orientation

Description: We have been learning about Position and Orientation with Eb. It is a part of our learning about Geometry at maths time.

WALT: give and follow directions using, left, right, up, down, North, South, East and West

Questions:

1. What major landmarks can you see from the Plaza? Bus stop, And city Library.

2. What is the closest landmark North-West from McDonalds? UNITED VIDEO.

3. What direction is the Arena from United Video? South West.

4. After the doctors I turn right down Victoria Ave and turn right at the round about. I travel South-West until the main road. Turn left. Follow road and stop at the 3rd right turn.Travel South-West and stop at the bottom corner of the square. What am I doing?...

a) Going Shopping ☑️        
b) Getting a Sandwich at Subway        
c) Getting a library book        
d) Hiring a DVD


5. Create your own instructions for someone to follow using the language you have learned.

At McDonald's go north west up Princess st. Turn second left onto Main st. Go down Main st. To the side of the square. Where are you?

A) Going on the bus

B) Going shopping

C) Getting a DVD

Feedback/feedfoward: I liked how you took the Picture of the map. Next time you could make the picture a little bit lighter. Kai.

Evaluation: I thought it was very fun because I knew it would be helpful when I am lost in the wild. I think I could give directions to other people. 

My Swimming Goals T1 2015

Description: For the next 5 weeks. We are swimming 3 times a week. We want to set a SMART goal so we are focused when we go swimming.



SMART goal:
My swimming goal is backstroke I have to push my tummy up to kick faster. I am going to be successful by practising keeping my tummy up so that I can kick faster.  I will be successful by the end of term.

Evaluation: It is hard to keep my tummy up doing backstroke next time I can work on keeping my tummy up as long as I can.

Story Telling

Purpose: create a story to share orally

Description: Oral storytelling is a Maori tradition. We have been planning our own story to tell on the Marae in Week 7.

This is my story telling video.

https://www.youtube.com/embed/393fcf_FPZU

Success Criteria:

• Between 1 and 2 minutes long

• Using your voice to make sounds effects

• Using your whole body to make actions

• Use your face to tell a story through facial expression

• Knowing the story, knowing the setting

• Get the picture into your listener’s head

• Stay in character - keep your composure.

• Audience participation

• Unique and original (Hook your audience)

  
  

  Evaluation:

  I need to work on making my voice louder & I was really scared becuase I thought no one would like it. I need to work on staying still & then the second time I do it I won't be that scared.